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Fearless Faschnod's Fast Frigate by DarkRiderDLMC Fearless Faschnod's Fast Frigate by DarkRiderDLMC
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Fearless Faschnod set off to sea
in his fast frigate, a pirate to be,
no other pirate'd be as fierce as he,
but plans so often go astray...

"Sail Ho!" came the lookout's cry,
as a fat merchantman grew nigh,
"Roll out the guns!" was his reply,
he'd not let them get away...

One shot fired, then another cry,
filled with fear, oh my, oh my!
Two heavy cruisers happened by
and Fearless started to pray...

Alas, his prayers availed naught,
his frigate sunk, his crew all caught,
a dreadful lesson would be taught,
a hangman's noose in play...

The moral here is pretty straight,
a pirate's life may well be great,
roll the bones and pick your fate,
the hangman's got time - he can wait...


The frigate is a jswindell' freebie, credit where credit is due.
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Kahless1701 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice work & a nice verse my friend. . .
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sed Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012
:icontxrabbit: Good job!
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DarkRiderDLMC Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012
Thank you!
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Brenna1976 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:clap: fantastic all in one!!:hug:
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DarkRiderDLMC Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012
:icongizmoplz:
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RavynsWorld Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012
Very Awesome Image & Poem!!
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DarkRiderDLMC Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012
Thank you!
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COLOREDINLOVE Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love this so much! Picture is awesome and the moon hanging in the sky so bright is really cool!!
Your poem or verse just made the picture more fantastic! Welcome back sweetie!! Seems like you are feeling better..or faking it really good!!
I will read your stories..and let you know what I think since I am sure you are waiting for my feedback!
I won't use cuss words ok??!! Love Ya Motorcycle Guy!!~~~
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DarkRiderDLMC Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012
:huggle: late...
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Ocalapoolguy Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012
Freakin Awesome !!
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DarkRiderDLMC Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012
Thanks, gave me a grin to do it :D
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Ocalapoolguy Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012
I bet it did ! :)
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Whazizname Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012   General Artist
Great image and poem!!!
:thumbsup: :thumbsup:
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DarkRiderDLMC Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012
Ty! Glad you liked it.
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Anovoca Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012   Writer
I love the poem for this. Excellent work! oh and the picture isn't bad either :nod:
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DarkRiderDLMC Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012
I had a hell of a time writing it, because even though you know there's no time limit on how long it takes to submit a dev, there always seems to be this feeling one should hurry...

...glad you liked it.
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Anovoca Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012   Writer
I know the feeling. I get that really bad in October when I think that I need to finish all of my unfinished horror pieces and get them published before Halloween.

But yeah, I see you post alot of poems on here and always wondered if you spent more time on the poem than the rendering. Most of them are great, and if I were you I'd be worried they get overlooked because they weren't submitted as literature. But since you don't label yourself as a lit oriented artist you probably aren't that worried about it.
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DarkRiderDLMC Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012
The poems under renders are always written during the submission process, so I guess I don't really think of them as literature - they're just five minute scrawls.

The few lit items I posted on dA weren't well recieved, though I'm kind'a proud of them. The Doctor's Office [link] and the cold, dark Please let me go [link] come to mind.
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